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November 27, 2008

Playing Off the Ball

One thing that I've gotten increasingly better at, which consequently has raised its importance in my mind is "playing off the ball." What I mean by this is that I now do a lot of writing when I'm not actually sitting in front of the computer typing. It's mainly about keeping my brain active creatively - sometimes by reading, being perceptive - so that I have a general openness to ideas when and if they come. This allows me to accomplish a lot, in a better, less pressurized way I think, when it seems like I'm not really doing anything at all. What happens then is that I end up building concepts and scenes and themes and characters naturally over the course of several days; nothing is forced. And "Happy Thanksgiving" to the 8 or 9 spammers who are reading this.

November 19, 2008

Radiohead - A Wolf at the Door

October 27, 2008

Attention to Detail

I happened to be reading a movie, and I got to a scene in which a man in his late 20s or early 30s was packing his bags and preparing to go on vacation. The action described him zipping up his bag and then taking his airline ticket off the desk and putting it in the outside pocket of the suitcase. When was the last time you flew without an e-ticket? At that point, I was done. I knew I wasn't in the hands of a storyteller who thought first about reality and then about the conventions of the movie screen, i.e. all those recycled movie moments that are deeply embedded in our brain. One of your first jobs as a writer is to become aware of the fact that those moments exist inside your head. Your second job is to make sure they go into the trash can and not onto the page. Reality, not cinema, is king.

September 28, 2008

Sympathy

sympathy.jpgOf course, if you write movies, the creation of sympathetic characters is one of your primary jobs. At least if you're writing in the commercial realm. When first approaching characters - I'm talking early drafts - this can be a pretty big challenge for me personally. A lot goes into the creation of a primary character - what do they want, what are their flaws, what inside the person can the audience identify with...is the character sympathetic or not? In the end, the big question, the one Kubrick "taught" me to ask about all things movie related is...is it true and is it interesting? Often, I find that the thing I initially concentrate on is making the character interesting. This can be defined in all sorts of ways - different things interest different people - but contrast and its sharper cousin conflict are two things I'm drawn to. The result is that there are times, early on, when my primary characters are interesting but not sympathetic. Which brings me to a fairly important question - what makes a character sympathetic?

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September 12, 2008

Titles

I'm in the middle of trying to come up with a title for my Irish project (previously referred to as The Legend of Mary Pike). So maybe it's perfect timing that I came across this article: http://www.davidbordwell.net/blog/?p=2805 I didn't come up with the title though after reading it.

August 28, 2008

Re-Writing Action

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I'm on the left, little bro's on the right.

July 14, 2008

Netflix Queue

I finally signed up for a Netflix account as an easy way to gain access to movies when Tim and I need to study. I thought it might be...fun...to post my queue here. Some of these movies are related to a script we're working on, a lot are not.

The Big Sleep, Stray Dog, Point Blank, The Diving Bell and the Butterfly, The Assassination of Jesse James, Grand Illusion, Blue Velvet, Brazil, Shampoo, The Last Detail, Repulsion

July 12, 2008

A Girl and a Gun

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I came across a NY Times review of a new book on Godard, w hich reminded me of one of my all time favorite quotes (by Godard, of course): "All you need for a movie is a girl and a gun." I then asked Tim if we'd written any movies in which guns don't make an appearance. The short answer: no.

David Koepp

The writer whose career me and Tim would most like to emulate at this point in our lives is David Koepp. Big, cinematic movies, many times working with directors...plus, he gets to direct every once in a while, too.

I will always be grateful to David for responding to a note I wrote him after seeing STIR OF ECHOES in 1999. I have the note posted on the wall of my desk (yes, my desk is so much of a structure that it has walls). I'm not entirely sure that I have a succinct reason for keeping it there - maybe I think of it as inspiration, or as of a reminder of how far I've come (somewhat far, not far enough) since I was a college student at NYU, or of how to remain gracious in success...either, or any, way it means something to me.

Here's an article about David from Variety. I've copied and pasted after the jump as well.

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June 22, 2008

Music from THE SURFACE

If you go to our old blog at www.mikeandtimschneider.blogspot.com you can listen to music that was in our original draft of THE SURFACE. Tim often writes to music, and at times we place music cues within our scripts. We removed them from the draft that went out because we felt like they got in the way of the tension and intensity of the reading experience. The songs, which can be streamed at the old blog, are in the order they appeared in the script - typically they're placed at big moments. For example, "Honey, Honey" by Feist was timed with Grant and Kate first seeing the cloud of gas appear over downtown Chicago.

June 18, 2008

www.scripped.com

Today, while I was putting together my notes on THE LEGEND OF MARY PIKE at, surprisingly, one of only two local Starbucks I was approached by a guy who handed me a flyer for www.scripped.com

Apparently, this is a site that acts sort of like Final Draft on the web, i.e. you log in and you can write your script on IE or Safari or Firefox and the website properly formats it, all for free - instead of having to pay upwards of $100 for Final Draft.

Now I am already a Final Draft user - and have been for about ten years now - so this doesn't help me out tremendously, but I do think it's a cool option for kids or people who might not want to drop three figures on a piece of software. This is a great way to keep their scripts formatted and to keep them writing.

If you need to, check it out. And if you're writing a movie, keep writing, but make sure that shit is hot.

June 06, 2008

Catch-22

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Is it funny that in my last post I said, "We don't talk about other people's movies on this blog too much" and then I proceed to make a second post, on the same day about another person's movie?

Okay, so there are better places to get comedy.

At any rate, I watched Catch-22 for the first time in my life two days ago. Sadly, it was on the small screen...although it did allow me to listen to an exceptional commentary between Steven Soderbergh and Mike Nichols. A couple of things from it that are worth noting:

Nichols said that during the shoot, he often felt things were going poorly because he wasn't worried, he was in a kind of trance - a trance that, later on in his career, he learned to trust.

Also, where Nichols and Soderbergh talk about how the movie has no subtext - what I wished they talked about more was how Nichols directed the scenes then. Was his direction merely based on appearance and tone? It's an interesting thing to think about, especially for me since all of our decisions are based on the motivations of characters, i.e. subtext.

I recommend it. The movie is a perfect example of the kind of movie - a very expensive art film - that rarely gets made today.

Burn After Reading

We don't talk about other people's movies all that much on this blog - which is a product of us controlling where our influences come from - but Burn After Reading, the Coen Brothers' new movie is probably our most favorite upcoming project.

May 23, 2008

A Detailed or Not So Detailed Look at the Writing Process

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Here I am, writing in long hand...for the first time in my life...now you can copy my handwriting and forge some documents on my behalf.

This is from the movie I'm writing for producer Anne Gately and director Paul Mercier in Ireland.

May 19, 2008

Dov Davidoff

There was a point, long ago - okay, maybe a year and a half ago - where Tim and I thought we were going to be making comedies for the rest of our lives. Then, we happened to try adapting a novel that wasn't funny at all, in the slightest. In fact, it was a dark action movie...Matrix-like they'll probably say if it ever gets made or is even ever offered up for sale. People seemed to enjoy what we did with that...not so much when it came to the comedies.

So here we are, writing movies with aliens, and black magic, and warriors (not that those things can't be in comedies...).

I mention this because I wanted to say that Dov Davidoff is my favorite comic on the planet, and if I was ever going to produce a comedy I would try and produce one where he could be the lead. I saw Dov at the Comedy Cellar in NYC two or three summers ago. He walked out on stage, looking and acting like an angry, paranoid, confused drunk...and what I watched wasn't just stand-up comedy, it was a performance. Since then I've had the pleasure of meeting him and seeing him live on one other occasion - at the Laugh Factory, with Michael Richards, one week before the...well, you know - and I'll stop trying to say positive things because it makes me sound disingenuous.

www.dovlive.com

His new album, The Point Is in stores and on iTunes now.

May 05, 2008

Alien T-Shirt = Rewriting THE SURFACE

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Today, I had this alien t-shirt on to signify the fact that I was re-writing THE SURFACE.

April 01, 2008

Craig Zahler

This is the first post I've done without a picture or a video, which is ironic, given the visual nature of Craig Zahler's writing. Craig is a screenwriter - I believe an unproduced one, although INCIDENT AT SANS ASYLUM may have been shot but not released yet. As far as unproduced or unknown outside of the industry writers go, Craig is my favorite. Without intending to, of course, his screenplays have taught me a lot about the necessity of visually breathtaking moments and the overall importance of sequences (not just scenes, but sequences). Aside from a movie's underlying meaning, how it connects with its audience, I think these are the two primary elements of big screen writing. This is how you create memorable moments.

I maintain that whenever BRIGANDS OF RATTLEBORGE comes together and the rain storm/robbery sequence is in the can, cut, and projected on screen it will be one for the history books.

March 23, 2008

Ivan Zacharias

I was reminded today of Ivan Zacharias, who's one of my favorite commercial directors.

March 08, 2008

The Raw Shark Texts

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I should've done this earlier, but a big congratulations goes out to Steven Hall, author of The Raw Shark Texts, which has just been named winner of the Borders Original Voices award. 

If you haven't read the book yet, I urge you to do so. I'm even in a link giving mood.

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February 21, 2008

The Only Thing I'll Write About The Oscars

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From Entertainment Weekly:

THERE WILL BE BLOOD (20% Chance of Winning Best Adapted Screenplay Oscar)
For It: Paul Thomas Anderson mined an Upton Sinclair novel to create some of 2007's most indelible lines and images.
Against It: The film's extended silences divert attention from the script.

This last part, "Against It" is insane to me...the possibility that, in the industry, there are still people who equate screenwriting only with dialogue is- Well, it makes me not want to write anything else about the Oscars.

Also, for those of you up in arms about my previous post -- please note that the video was directed by Jeremy Blake and that the subject of the post was "Untitled."

Thanks for your time, energy, and dedication to your craft.